11 thoughts on “First Draft: From A Winter Walk

  1. Really good, Andy. Evocative and vivid — “opaline sky” is wonderful!

    As for Jersey Street, because I was unfortunately born and raised in New Jersey, USA, I read your last couplet and immediately thought of Bruce Springsteen. 🤣

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    • Thank you. I have a few friends who would be pleased with that connection!
      Though that’s the part I don’t like, I don’t think it will survive a second drafting.

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